It's my first time to write a jurnal. Today, everything is nice, and I feel better than yesterday. As a college student, I argue that the essential thing is that you should do your studies. To be honest, before you studied your studies, I think that you should have a goal, likes you want to do in the future, to be a player or a singer, it's ok. What's more, the study ability of you also is important, everything needs practice, but most of us don't have courage to compete these things which you don't want to do at first. As far as I'm concercend, the first is terrible, bad. It's undeniable that everything has its good or bad sides, it depends how you face to it. So chance and risk are all exist. Finally, I hope I have the next time I can have a good improvement in English writing.
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This is my first time writing a journal. Today, everything is fine, and I feel better than I did yesterday. As a college student, I believe that the most important thing is to focus on your studies. However, before you begin studying, I think you should have a goal, such as what you want to do in the future. It could be anything - becoming an athlete or a singer, for example.
Furthmore, your ability to learn is also crucial. Everything requires practice, but most of us lack the courage to tackle things we initially don't want to do. In my opinion, the first step is often the hardest and can feel quite discouraging. It's undeniable that everything has both good and bad aspects; it all depends on how you face them. Therefore, opportunities and risks always coexist.
Finally, I hope that next time, I can show significate improvement in my English writing.
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Today was a good day, I feel better than I did yesterday in this morning because I didn't take medicine. In my opinion, it's a terrible thing that taking medicine everyday, but taking medicine is necessary for me. If I don't take medicine everyday, I will feel terrible. However, taking too much medicine, in result, I also feel bad. Therefore, I don't know how to do. I saw a doctor one year ago, while that doctor told me I have a high blood pressure.
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Today was a good day, I felt better this morning than I did yesterday, even though I didn't take my medicine. In my opinion, having to take medicine every day is terrible, but it's necessary for me. If I don't take it, I feel unwell. However, as a result of taking too much, I also end up feeling bad. This leaves me unsure of what to do. About a year ago, a doctor told me that I have a high blood pressure, which is the reason I need this medicine.