This Thursday, My mom and I went to supermarket in the afternoon, and then we arrived at the supermarket by car at around 1 p.m. to buy some daily necessities. At first I felt great, but it wasn't long before I started to feel the strain. However, this situation did not last long. When I went home, I measured my blood pressure, but there was no promble. I guess it might be because I didn't sleep well last night.
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This Thursday afternoon, my mom and I went to the supermarket to buy some daily necessities. We arrived there by car at around 1 p.m. At first, I felt great, but it wasn't long before I started to feel the strain. However, this situation didn't last long. When I got home, I measured my blood pressure, but there was no problem. I think it might be because I didn't sleep well last night.
This Thursday afternoon, my mom and I went to the supermarket to buy some daily necessities. We arrived there by car at around 1 p.m. At first, I felt great, but it wasn't long before I started to feel the strain. However, this situation didn't last long. When I got home, I measured my blood pressure, but there was no problem. I think it might be because I didn't sleep well last night.